Junior Limerick Section for young 'uns & Learners!

[Daisy]

You have got the limerick rhythm very well Icey - well done.

[Icecream342]

Do I qualify for the Adult section??

[Daisy]

If you can produce limericks as good as that, I don't see why not!

[Lucky Star]

That one was really good Icey.

[Trevor]

A Monkey ran spare in the cage,
he was angry and so full of rage.
They'd taken away,
his mate for the day,
and left him alone with the sage.

Great one Icey! "Absolutly and totaly wizard" as Fatty probably could have said. (If that makes sense.)

Do I qualify for the Adult section??

I couldn't say as it isn't my position to, but I think you could. You do anyway don't you?

[elizabeth]

i'm not very sure if i had posted it or not.I didn't check the syllable.

Young Anne of Green Gables
Who did not know to recite tables
She had very good imagination
and lots of determination
She had read a lot of fables

[Daisy]

Good to see you back Elizabeth. I think you have forgotten the syllable rules though! Lines 1&2 8 or 9 syllables, 3&4 5or6 syllables, then the last line should match the first 2.
How about this:
Young Anne who lived at Green Gables
Was not very good at her tables
With imagination
And determination
She read any amount of old fables.

I found trying to use your idea for lines 3 and 4 rather difficult to fit.

[7upromana01]

When little Anne started playing house
In the larder she found a mouse
She started to squeal
While she made her meal
And then appeared a wood-louse

Was that good?

[elizabeth]

I think you did very nicely.

[7upromana01]

Thanks, Elizabeth. By the way, I love your avatar.

[elizabeth]

Thanks a lot ,abi .So who's starting the next one?

[Daisy]

You can if you like Elizabeth. It's good to see you back here again.

[elizabeth]

Thanks.I am not sure about this.Anyone who has a better suggestion is free to improve it.

There was once a dancer called Belle

[7upromana01]

There was once a dancer called Belle
Who had a friend called Mel

[elizabeth]

Abi,i think you could have made the second line a bit longer as it has only 6 syllables instead of 8/9.