sending the book off!
- Philip Mannering
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Re: sending the book off!
Although I did find some errors (which, I must tell you, are very trivial), I must say that overall both of the stories were good.
"A holiday — a mystery — an adventure — and a happy ending for dear old Barney!" said Roger. "What more could anyone want?"
"An ice cream," said Snubby promptly. "Who's coming to buy one?" The Rubadub Mystery
"An ice cream," said Snubby promptly. "Who's coming to buy one?" The Rubadub Mystery
Re: sending the book off!
thankyou, all
As for the errors, before I send it the full story in the post to the publisher, I will try and get my dad to check the grammar, spelling, ect.
Phillip, could you tell me the errors so I can correct them?
As for the errors, before I send it the full story in the post to the publisher, I will try and get my dad to check the grammar, spelling, ect.
Phillip, could you tell me the errors so I can correct them?
- Philip Mannering
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Re: sending the book off!
Hi Anna,
I have PMd you with suggestions for replacements of errors - check your inbox.
I have PMd you with suggestions for replacements of errors - check your inbox.
"A holiday — a mystery — an adventure — and a happy ending for dear old Barney!" said Roger. "What more could anyone want?"
"An ice cream," said Snubby promptly. "Who's coming to buy one?" The Rubadub Mystery
"An ice cream," said Snubby promptly. "Who's coming to buy one?" The Rubadub Mystery