The Mystery of Fitzjames Manor
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The Mystery of Fitzjames Manor
I'm sure most people on the forums are aware of the fan-fic over on our sister site, but I can't find any comments on a FFO continuation novel The Mystery of Fitzjames Manor by Richard Humphreys, it's well written and very funny, the chapter where Ern does some detective work is hilarious. If you've missed it it's well worth a look.
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Re: The Mystery of Fitzjames Manor
I read this a few months ago and yes, it is a very good. I really enjoyed it.
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Re: The Mystery of Fitzjames Manor
I followed the link but ended up engrossed in Julie's Find Outer continuation stories instead! - I'd read most of them a while back but always good to reread! Brilliant stuff!
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
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Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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Re: The Mystery of Fitzjames Manor
Thanks, Robert.
I did start to read the Fitzjames Manor, but sadly only got about three chapters in. Sadly for me, it didn't flow in the Blyton way, and many things that Fatty said in this story, just wasn't what the 'real Fatty' would say, I thought.
So sadly it wasn't for me.
I did start to read the Fitzjames Manor, but sadly only got about three chapters in. Sadly for me, it didn't flow in the Blyton way, and many things that Fatty said in this story, just wasn't what the 'real Fatty' would say, I thought.
So sadly it wasn't for me.
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Re: The Mystery of Fitzjames Manor
I started to read it earlier today and have to admit I agree with you, Julie. No offence meant to the author, but it just doesn't sound like Blyton to me. That said, it can't be easy to write in another author's style and sound consistently like that author (and without descending into parody!), so I admire anyone who gives it a go.
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Re: The Mystery of Fitzjames Manor
I felt the same - his style wasn't at all like Blyton. Perhaps continuation novels don't need to be like the originals - but in my opinion they should be. It's difficult to write in another writer's style, but surely that's the point? Again, I'm not criticising the writer - his style was good, and no doubt the story was good, but as it didn't echo Blyton's style I soon gave up on it.
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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Re: The Mystery of Fitzjames Manor
I must take some responsibility in this, as Keith asked me to read it first and give my opinion as to whether it was good enough to appear on the website. I did, and told Keith that although it wasn't written in quite the same style as Enid, I felt it a worthy addition to Keith's fan-fic section. I also proof-read it, so any mistakes are my fault, too.
I am re-reading it now on my Kindle, which doesn't have the annoying (to me, anyway) double spaces between paragraphs. It is laid out as a proper book.
I am re-reading it now on my Kindle, which doesn't have the annoying (to me, anyway) double spaces between paragraphs. It is laid out as a proper book.
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I agree - I find the layout with the spaces between paragraphs a little off-putting. All the serials on here get that treatment - although initially I typed mine in proper paragraphs with indents. In a way the spaces spoil the flow, in my opinion, but I guess that's a website convention!
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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Re: The Mystery of Fitzjames Manor
I have just finished re-reading the story and thoroughly enjoyed it. It flowed like a Blyton, and I find it a far better story than Banshee Towers. Apologies for all the typos - I was sure I had proof-read it, but if so made a ham-fisted job of it.
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That's a backward compliment if ever I saw one!!Moonraker wrote: and I find it a far better story than Banshee Towers.
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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Re: The Mystery of Fitzjames Manor
I always think it is hard to proof read something, especially if you are enjoying the story. And sometimes, your brain doesn't see the mistakes, as it corrects them as you read.
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"See that? It's the black Bentley again. KMF 102!"
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Re: The Mystery of Fitzjames Manor
I think that is certainly true when you're re-reading your own writing - because you know what it should say. I also think you're right Julie, that if you're enjoying the story your brain just tells you what a word really should be, and you may not register that it it wrongly spelled.
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I agree - it's really difficult proof-reading your own work - I always miss errors in my own writing. Slightly easier in other people's work, but I agree, if you get carried along with the story it's different. My main complaint about Mystery of Fitzjames Manor was that it didn't read like Enid Blyton - it seemed too modern in tone.
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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I don't remember feeling that, but it is some time since I read it.Rob Houghton wrote: My main complaint about Mystery of Fitzjames Manor was that it didn't read like Enid Blyton - it seemed too modern in tone.
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I think, rather than 'modern' as such, it was just the use of very short sentences and dialogue. Enid rarely used short pieces of dialogue, and she would have explained who 'she' was right from the beginning of the chapter. I only read the first few pages and then gave up, but I will try it again sometime and see how I get on.
'Oh voice of Spring of Youth
hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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hearts mad delight,
Sing on, sing on, and when the sun is gone
I'll warm me with your echoes
through the night.'
(E. Blyton, Sunday Times, 1951)
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