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Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 14 Aug 2017, 11:42
by Rob Houghton
A 'top notch' chapter, Daisy - really enjoyable and suspenseful! I always love 'night adventures'. :-D Brilliant stuff!

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 14 Aug 2017, 13:11
by Daisy
Thank you Rob. Nearly at the end now and looking forward to your next one.

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 14 Aug 2017, 14:41
by Rob Houghton
Not really sure about my next one! We'll see!! :-D

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 16 Aug 2017, 06:05
by Nick
It has been a few weeks since I commented but I'm still reading Daisy. Utterly brilliant last chapter, I actually had a shiver run down my spine at one point. Top stuff!

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 16 Aug 2017, 11:17
by Daisy
Thank you so much for your kind remarks, Nick, Rob and Julie. I am pleased you have been enjoying the story.

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 21 Aug 2017, 07:41
by Nick
Finishing off nicely Daisy.

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 21 Aug 2017, 09:56
by Dinah Cunningham
good chapter, looking forward to the last (if I remember correctly)

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 21 Aug 2017, 10:35
by Daisy
Thanks Nick and Dinah. Yes, next week is the last one.

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 21 Aug 2017, 11:16
by Rob Houghton
Very enjoyable chapter, Daisy. I loved the way the children followed the trail! Just an observation though...why didn't George escape if he could open the door? ;-) Hope you don't take that as a criticism - I just wondered. Maybe I read that section wrongly. :-D

I've really enjoyed this story - a worthy addition to the SS series. I'm interested to see how it all gets rounded off next time. 8)

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 21 Aug 2017, 11:42
by Daisy
:lol: Rob.... you're quite right - I just imagined George had been so woozy and tired, that the silly fellow dumped him - probably not knowing quite what to do with him!

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 21 Aug 2017, 12:36
by Rob Houghton
:D 8)

i know, its very easy as a writer to let your imagination 'fill in the gaps' without realising it! it happens with me quite often! 8)

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 21 Aug 2017, 13:15
by Chrissie777
Daisy wrote:Thanks Nick and Dinah. Yes, next week is the last one.
Then I will print it out and read it, Daisy. 8)

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 22 Aug 2017, 12:40
by Moonraker
Daisy wrote: Yes, next week is the last one.
That's good. I can then read it! :D

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 22 Aug 2017, 13:41
by Eddie Muir
I've also been waiting eagerly for the serial to finish so that I can read it in its entirety, Daisy. :D

Re: New Weekly Serial

Posted: 22 Aug 2017, 14:06
by Rob Houghton
Chrissie777 wrote:
Daisy wrote:Thanks Nick and Dinah. Yes, next week is the last one.
Then I will print it out and read it, Daisy. 8)
Moonraker wrote:
Daisy wrote: Yes, next week is the last one.
That's good. I can then read it! :D
Eddie Muir wrote:I've also been waiting eagerly for the serial to finish so that I can read it in its entirety, Daisy. :D
Now I'm beginning to understand why so few people leave comments on this thread, lol!! :shock: :wink: