New Weekly Serial

What would you like to see? All feedback and suggestions appreciated!
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Thanks, Daisy. :)

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Very good story! Yes, the last chapter was really a surprise, I wouldn't have thought of that ending! But now I'm sad that it is finished. And now I'm curious about the next serial.
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Yes, it was a fine story, and a twist at the end! I could visualise the scenes and characters just as I can with a 'real' Blyton, so well done, Julie.
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Glad you enjoyed it Dinah and Nigel. :)

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I started reading the serial on a regular basis but found I was having to recap the events of the previous week on occasions. Now the serial has ended I intend to read it all at once so I will post my thoughts when I've done that, Julie.
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John Pickup wrote:Now the serial has ended I intend to read it all at once so I will post my thoughts when I've done that, Julie.
I plan to do the same.
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Kate Mary wrote:Julie's serial has been a most enjoyable read. I didn't see the twist in the final chapter coming at all.
Neither did I! A clever twist in an enjoyable story. I loved the setting too!
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Glad you enjoyed it, Anita. It was nice to hear from a member on the message board, as feedback is always nice to hear. :)

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Julie, I also really enjoyed the story, particularly the final twist. Well done and thank you.
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Thank you Black Labrador, glad you enjoyed it and the little twist at the end of the story. :D

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Julie, I still need to print out the last 3 chapters, then I will read the whole story.
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Hurrah! We have a splendid new serial starring the Secret Seven. An excellent beginning, well done Ilsa.
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Thank you Kate Mary.
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A nice start to a new serial, Ilsa. :D

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Thank you Julie.
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