New Weekly Serial

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Moonraker wrote: You're not alone, Rob! And I'm not even reading it! :? :?
I must admit sixret's sandwich confused me too, as that doesn't come into the story at all. :?
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Maybe sixret's feeling peckish....

I look forward to reading your story, Daisy, when it's all loaded. :)
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Well my brain was a bit rusty. I saw spam and tomatoes and I deduced it must have been sandwich. :oops:
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No... just food to be stored just then... although it probably ends up in a sandwich eventually!
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Nice reference to Janet's power of observation, Daisy. I think this is only mentioned in one SS tale?
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Yes, well done, Janet. But one person seems to be missing, especially when food was being prepared. Where was Scamper! :lol:
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I must say when writing these stories which include animals, I find it hard at times to remember to include them, - unless they happen to play an integral part in the plot!
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Daisy wrote:I must say when writing these stories which include animals, I find it hard at times to remember to include them, - unless they happen to play an integral part in the plot!
Me too! I find them a bit of a nuisance!! Especially Miranda and Loony! :lol:
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How many chapters all together, Daisy?
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Twenty, Nick.
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Nick wrote:How many chapters all together, Daisy?
20, according to the serial heading. ;-)
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Very intriguing chapter Daisy! Wonder what's going on in that caravan! :D
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Great chapter, Daisy the adventure is shaping up nicely.
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Thanks Nick... nice to hear someone's reading it chapter by chapter. :D
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I'm reading it chapter by chapter, Daisy, and enjoying it. :)
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